Kaf Mountain
She needed to see it.
“Must you?” A man said, appearing from beyond the peak.
Her people couldn't be right.
“Oh, they aren't,” he said with a harsh laugh. “Not about everything. You've traveled my path up the mountain, so you are mine to deal with.” The djinn held out his hands. “Choose. Look pass the mountain and become my servant, or travel back to your people and the death that awaits.”
“Look," Artakama said, her voice shallow.
The djinn dragged her forward until she stood at the peak, overseeing everything. The mist slowly parted and Artakama breath caught in her throat.
A vast ocean stretched, so green it tinted the sky. But at the edge of the ocean, more mountains.
More.
The djinn weaved his hand in front of her face and Artakama watched her last breath crystallized into a beautiful purple gem. She breathed again, this time easier.
“This is your last breath,” the djinn said. “It belongs to me now, and so do you,”
Aylssa, first off, I want to thank you for your thoughtful post on my blog. You made me step back and rethink and I'm going to try to do as you suggested. Secondly, I want to know what happens next in this story!!!!!
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I'm glad you're still going to keep up with your blog! I definitely looked forward to reading them. You had me hooked at Crimson King. XD BUT, I love learning about books and new books or old books. So I'm looking forward to your new posts as well. ^_^ (or your blog in general. heh)
DeleteThis is eerie, and very intriguing!
ReplyDeleteThanks! There are some really awesome myths out there there. ^_^
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